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when the curtain parts

When the curtain parts, when the doors open, when unknown beings from there come here, they always arrive in an empty parking lot, at twilight, when the sky is glowing but the earth is dim, and the electric lights of humankind seem as weak as a last breath.

portentous sky

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puddleshark
Sep. 26th, 2017 05:49 pm (UTC)
Fabulous.

I keep thinking I saw a figure in the centre of the lot, but when I look again, there's no-one there...
asakiyume
Sep. 26th, 2017 05:50 pm (UTC)
:-)

Some people can only be seen peripherally.
galestorm
Sep. 28th, 2017 04:45 pm (UTC)
:-)

And only accidentally. Yeah, just try to see it accidentally, and you won’t.
sartorias
Sep. 26th, 2017 08:34 pm (UTC)
Oh, so beautiful!
asakiyume
Sep. 27th, 2017 04:14 am (UTC)
Thank you <3
zyzyly
Sep. 27th, 2017 05:31 am (UTC)
beautiful!
asakiyume
Sep. 27th, 2017 11:37 am (UTC)
Thanks! It really was like that in real life too--though maybe not seeming quite as dark in the earthly portion.
oiktirmos
Sep. 27th, 2017 01:02 pm (UTC)
When the curtain parts, when the doors open, when unknown beings from there come here, they always arrive in an empty parking lot, at twilight, when the sky is glowing but the earth is dim, and the electric lights of humankind seem as weak as a last breath.
If only The Outer Limits had you as a writer...
asakiyume
Sep. 27th, 2017 04:54 pm (UTC)
I have a big advantage over them in that I'm providing only a fragment. I might choke if I had to write a whole episode!
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